What do you think of these lyrics? (Adele Inspired)?

Hi, I'm a 28 year old man. Since hearing Adeles song 'Someone Like You' I've been pretty upset in general. I had to put these words down as I dream of this person I used to love most nights....I think it'd sound better with a female singing as I cant sing to save my life.....what do you reckon? Just imagine Adele singing this......



I don鈥檛 know you anymore,

It鈥檚 been years since you last came to my door,

But in my dreams, I see you everyday.



I know that you鈥檙e not here,

It鈥檚 just an echo of yester year,

But that doesn鈥檛 stop the pain when I see you crystal clear



I鈥檓 happy where I am, long time over the sorrow

But still鈥?.Don鈥檛 let me dream of you tomorrow

I鈥檓 happy where I am, long time over the sorrow

So please鈥?.Don鈥檛 let me dream of you tomorrow



Some nights I鈥檓 scared to even close my eyes,

When I do I鈥檓 taken back in time,

Seeing you again is so.....so unkind



Know it鈥檚 illusion not reality,

But I鈥檓 still haunted by your memory,

Can't ignore, what my head is telling me,



And I know all good things must end,

Thought with time that my heart would mend,

But I can鈥檛 forget when I could call you....my friend,



I鈥檓 happy where I am, long time over the sorrow

But still鈥?.Don鈥檛 let me dream of you tomorrow

I鈥檓 happy where I am, long time over the sorrow

So please鈥?.Don鈥檛 let me dream of you tomorrow



And I know this isn't real,

But it doesn't change how I feel,

Just close my eyes and I see you once again,



I know we鈥檝e both moved on,

I鈥檝e found happiness, even though that you鈥檙e gone,

So please鈥?.Don鈥檛 let me dream of you tomorrow







Needs a bit or re-arranging and tweaking but what do you think?What do you think of these lyrics? (Adele Inspired)?
Wow these are the kind of lyrics I wish that most artists would write like today, instead its all about sex or drugs or partying hard. These are the kind of lyrics that will really speak to people, and make music in general something that people can love once again.

And lyrics don't have to rhyme, the beauty of the words are enough to give a rhythm. I love the first two verses-seriously amazing song :)What do you think of these lyrics? (Adele Inspired)?
These lyrics are really good! I write songs too sometimes and I actually really like your lyrics. Personally, I can hear a male voice singing this instead of a female voice. It's a really sweet song, just edit a few bits and you'll be set :DWhat do you think of these lyrics? (Adele Inspired)?
Wow, this is really good!

I dont know if its suppose to be like that but shouldnt this: "Know it鈥檚 illusion not reality," shouldnt it be Now* instead of know?

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