Can someone help me break into the rap business?

im 15 and inly been rapping for a year but have been told on many occasions i have a naturall talent for rapping and would be wasting an oportunity to suceed in music by not inuring i make it as a rapper, if im not ready now i kno for a fact i have potential and could suceed in the industry if i was just given a break in life. i wrote down a quick rap i literally thought of in 10 mins and it doesnt have much meaning other than im talking about how the rap business needs to be how its used to be instead of all these **** rappers now days, also another rap of mine i wrote 2 days ago in about 4 hours so whether you think it is as good or not as the first one u can see how much i have improved within 2 days.



Rap number 1: Time to write: 10 mins from top of my head



your complexity is next to me its making me so vex you see

a wasted oppurtunity as im covered in my sweat to be..

the biggest thing in rap since pac compacked his cab and went to sleep

lay in a whole six foot deep and never woke up to reflect his streak

infect the g's and refugees with my flows thats so complex you see

a rhyme structure that will let you see the next thing in the rap industry

their wanting me to suceed and make rap what it used to be

*** the waynes, rosses, and guccis

lets take it back to Em' and see the king of the rap embacy

he would mangle handle any emcee of white black or blue ethnicity.......



i cant be bothered to write more as its just of the top of my head.....



Rap number 2: Time to write: 4 hours



ima intercept it, reck it and even correct it

my flow is so sweet on the mic its a killa for diabetics

roll the credits, your careers has been lyrically ended

by a teen repremended before his pubes were detected

i hope you see my real talent with no time to inspect it

i need to direct it, all these good signs are connected

i wont project in the game until my rhymes are perfected

you need to see the backround that im from, and respect it

this country needs disecting from the crime thats erecting

pass the goverment a map i think they need some directing

even thou i will struggle the drug game disconnecting

its the life that i need its a life with protection

its a life where i rap and i need no aggression

this is my only shot to make my mum proud of her egg n'

we are taking rap to war and i can be the main weapon

this is a methaphor for rap for every minute and second







i hope you can see through your eyes that i could use a break

im the kinda guy struggling to get through everyday

dealing with the white powder just to put food on my plate

i just need to fix my life with some glue and some tape

only joking, my life turned blue at that stage

i need to be locked in a cage, my life is brewing with rage

until someone spots me and concludes my final page

but for now ,my lifes just a sho-in for waste

its backwards, i try to put my sho-in my lace

i wanna look back and say i flew to the states

made my first million as i grew in the rap-race

grow a fat face, easily recognisable in that fat place

knows as the cat who spats lyrics like a mace

i wanna be known as that lyrical legend

the guy who sprayed a verse in only 7 seconds

only 15 years old tell me what do you reckon'?

im taking rap to war and i can be the main weapon

this is a methaphor for rap for every minute and second



so compare the too raps considering the effort i put into each one and let me know if u can help me get into the business and promote myself better as i am struggling write now and i dont want to waste this oppurtunity.

+comepare my lyrics to those of the rappers i mentioned in my 1st rap other than eminem and see who is better lyrically and i know i will be the one you choose

thank you...Can someone help me break into the rap business?
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I'm in your same posistion bro, i'm 14 and trying to make it big. Your good dude, good :) Good luck.



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I maybe able to help you buddy. I have a productions team and we shall be a label soon, I love your lyrics. If you want you could talk to us about signing? jake_bowman@live.co.uk



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Speak soon!