What do you think of lyrics?

I'm 14, and write songs ALL the time...its like my main hobby. I record them on my mums 8-track too, and I'm hoping to go to Liverpool institute of performing arts...but anyway, how good do you reckon these lyrics are....its the latest one I wrote...



I never said

I was the perfect girl

And I am sick of tryna impress you

I never said I could light up your world

Boy don鈥檛 say it cause it isn鈥檛 true



Don鈥檛 say the words before you鈥檝e looked them up

Cause you don鈥檛 you know you鈥檒l end up in a hole

I don鈥檛 believe that you are worth the hipe

Because right now I鈥檓 feeling pretty low



Don鈥檛 walk away

Don鈥檛 walk way

I need to hear

The words you can鈥檛 say



It鈥檚 the little comments

You make

That get on my nerves

It鈥檚 every single

Insult

That鈥檚 what really hurts

Can鈥檛 you try to find

A little peace of mind

Yeh try an apology

It wouldn鈥檛 hurt



Are you honestly in love with yourself

Because that鈥檚 how it comes across

And to be honest I think you need help

How the hell can you call yourself boss



Don鈥檛 walk away

Don鈥檛 walk way

I need to hear

The words you can鈥檛 say



It鈥檚 the little comments

You make

That get on my nerves

It鈥檚 every single

Insult

That鈥檚 what really hurts

Can鈥檛 you try to find

A little peace of mind

Yeh try an apology

It wouldn鈥檛 hurt





I鈥檓 not looking for someone

Like you

Even if I had to fall

For you

But I鈥檓 not out for mr right



I just want to love

Without the fights



Don鈥檛 walk away

Don鈥檛 walk way

I need to hear

The words you can鈥檛 say



It鈥檚 the little comments

You make

That get on my nerves

It鈥檚 every single

Insult

That鈥檚 what really hurts

Can鈥檛 you try to find

A little peace of mind

Yeh try an apology

It wouldn鈥檛 hurt



By the way, I can't choose between being a graphic designer, OR going and trying to become a musician...I would love both but I was wonderin if I'm good enough?

I know you kinda need to hear me, but based on this...What do you think of lyrics?
I really like your lyrics, and if it is your dream to become a musician, you should follow it. However, I would try to continue with my education. If you earned a degree in Graphic Arts, you would then have a means to befriend others in the Arts. Thus, you will have more access to the music business. There is a high demand for graphic artists within the music world, believe it or not.What do you think of lyrics?
You are welcome. Best of Luck!

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What do you think of lyrics?
there ok... why dont u write a song about sumer? or fun? some thing OTHER THAN school. sryy.. i really dont like school.







but anyways yeah.. a song about summer