What do you think of these lyrics I wrote?

First draft, haven't quite got the tune yet. Just some thoughts :)

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You men who we trusted to play good politics,

Turned out to be nothing but selfish pricks,

Now rooms thundering with the calling of names,

Democracy鈥檚 mafia saying who鈥檚 to blame,

You鈥檙e upset just 鈥榗us thinking you鈥檙e losing,

So you will join in on all the abusing,

But in reality each second wasted, another family loses pay,

And everywhere Mommies and Daddies are losing jobs each day,

Our money, Gambled,

Our dreams, Shambled,

Your promises, Broken,

Your lives? Chokin鈥?

Our voices? Unspoken.



We were all dragged through the mud and through the rain,

By you men who aren鈥檛 worth the blood that runs in your veins,

By you men in suits, who I will always believe,

Try to get the better of us, by trying to deceive, the

Working class people who ricks their own necks

Hoping you won鈥檛 let them down, or cause any wrecks,

Yet you thrown them to the ground, you lost control,

Hoping that the profit you鈥檇 make would buy back your soul,

Now they鈥檙e all gone,

And you were all wrong,

They鈥檝e death in their eyes,

Because of all of your lies.

It鈥檚 you they despise, just apologise,



Only know we see how Bushes election was a reckoned crime,

Tell me how the hell did it happen a second time?

My eastern neighbours came here to find jobs with ease,

But for years now they鈥檝e all been overseas,

I hope and pray, for some summer afternoon,

In which this entire crisis is over soon,

And my daughter she鈥檒l laugh and play,

Without worrying why Mommy鈥檚 crying again today,

But until then I just wish you鈥檒l pay,

For the crimes you commit each day,

For all the war that you have grown,

For all the young blood that you have flown,

You鈥檙e one of the people that I鈥檝e most hated,

I鈥檇 pick up arms myself to see you鈥檙e assassinated,

And I'll hold my rifle above the flood,

And I'll violently spit in your cud,

And I'll walk through rain and mud,

Just to show you, how you've taken blood.

And you may cry, or you may even act brave,

As I force you to dig your own grave.What do you think of these lyrics I wrote?
Your lyrics are awesome! Except I would change 1 thing, which is changing shambled to shattered.
Our dreams, shattered-in my opinion it would sound better with shattered, than shambled.

As the genre and tune, I think it should be a hip-hop/pop kind of thing. Btw, shambled means to walk or go awkwardly.