(Fog-horns, even bow-bells) poem, will you c/c if you may?

[Fog-horns, even bow-bells]



Nautilus on a cargo vessel, to avail,

devoid of an older route, and drift

his beats of abreacted pulse, to trail,

his home-land on cloudy forms, to lift.



Long locked in dreams, assemblage,

soul sails forward, spilled life's wine,

in Nordic Northern seas, God Brage,

unworldly lyrics to compose, in brine.



I reckon he befits an Angel, alone,

he plays a harmonica in broken notes,

a song for loners or friends, gone,

mistral petals him along, as boat floats.



I reckon he remembers her, a Naiad,

the sun crowns his head, far setting,

a dalliance, a harbor song, her bard,

depicting of his solitude's odd wedding.



In dark she comes, from away shore,

along windy fog-horns eerie call, in air,

she sails gliding, comely to invite afore,

Nautilus and all drifting souls, in despair.



She comes as bow-bells ring, and sings:

'Enfold me in your lone heart, and I,

shall lift your soul, with halcyon wings,

to fly in incipient stills, to imbue of nigh.'



She sings along, as drifts of mist repeat:

'Enfold me in your lone heart, and I,

shall lift your soul, with halcyon wings,

to fly in incipient stills, to imbue of nigh.'



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Copyright ? - G. V.- 11.29.2011 / 28985177(Fog-horns, even bow-bells) poem, will you c/c if you may?
Serious writing. Yes, each word in there is weighed nicely, (as you said to many people), Indeed the story is beautiful and unexpected, you present another person who is in love with this harbor Siren, and then all of the crew senses his barratry. Beautiful, and sentimental poem, yet masculine and lonely. A 10! My regards, Sir!(Fog-horns, even bow-bells) poem, will you c/c if you may?
Excellent poem! Excellent story, vocabulary, rhyming. Who is this poor case in #1 A.? 3 out of 5? lol!!!(Fog-horns, even bow-bells) poem, will you c/c if you may?
There's no story or theme. Its abstract. With that, I give it a 3 out of 5.