Song lyrics, what do ya think?

well i dunno i must have written these like 2 or so years ago but what do you reckon of them, any point trying to figure out some chords for them. Also one isn't finished just random words that splurged from my head to the page.



Song 1



Verse: Walking down the school hallway

Just thinking of something to say

Would it be to obvious to tell you

that I care for you like I do



Chorus: Because I'm Gazing into his his eyes

He can't see that behind my face is a thosand lies

hoping that he'll just see me

the way i wish I could be



Verse: just a happy smile from you

will brighten up my whole day too

anyother girl i see you with

shows its for you that i live



Chorus



Random bridgeish thing: I never like to see you frown

I never like to see you down

I just want your smile to be true



Altered chorus: Because I'm gazing into your eyes

you can't see that behind this face is a thousand lies

hoping that you'll just see me they way i wish i could be



(add in some ooos aaas and la de das)



Walking down the school hallway

Just thinking of something to... say



Song 2 (more of a countryish pop feel to the song)

Verse: He's a ladies man a flirt

he's never gonna' see

that all my secrets that he blurts

they really do hurt me

but as he goes a long in his fairytale lifestyle

somethings gonna' trip him up

but it looks like it'll be a while



Chorus: Just you wait he's sure to see

that he's trampling all over my heart

I love him to much but he'll never love me

He never thinks of me when we're apart



Verse 2

I look at him he smiles straight back

it's just a pity its so rhearsed

(never finished this verse the only other bit of this song is the last chorus)



altered chorus: Just a shame he never did see

he trampled all over my heart

I loved him so much he never loved me

now i never think of him when we're apart





Yeh so what dya think of them, anything needs to be altered, anypoint actually doing anything with them. I can't remeber who they were about but it seems they were a bit of a (insert rude word here)

thanks for your time guys :)Song lyrics, what do ya think?
looks like u just need 2 finish verse 2 of da 2nd song %26amp; then u hav writen 2 amazing songs!



hope i helped! XD