Are these lyrics a good start?

ok so in a random mood so trying to get a sort of song idea in my mind, i was thinking maybe rap but sort of lowkey style or something like that?

like a soft but good beat



Have you ever woke up and wish you didn鈥檛

Your hearts skipped a beat and lost its rhythm

Reality is calling but something鈥檚 missing

Happiness is miles away yet you鈥檙e not prepared to travel

Pain in the heart and the memories start to unravel

Your life situation is a constant reminder

Feelings of guilt for not being a fighter

Were are you鈥檙e your goals and your true desire

Switch on the television to bury your mind in fiction

Block out the thoughts of your mental prison

But the weak have fallen and the strong have risen

Maybe its suppression or suffering from depression

To lost in myself to ask others what they reckon

im in a dark place and slowly loosing my mates

is it an illusion,is everything fakeAre these lyrics a good start?
OMG!!! That was AMAZING. I love it keep on writingAre these lyrics a good start?
That's beautiful. It really gives that dark mood, I like it.Are these lyrics a good start?
wow you are random [:
its really good(: